by: Jenny Rough

Saturday, June 30, 2007

72 Words

I place a near-empty mug of green tea on my desk and lean back in my chair.

On the computer screen is my latest essay.

I wrote the first draft a year ago, then let it sit awhile.

Wrote the second, third, fourth, fifth, six, and seventh drafts about six months later, over the course of a few weeks. Then let it sit awhile.

This morning I pulled it up again. Now it's almost done. It's missing one tiny paragraph - the portion of the essay I always struggle with, the part right before the conclusion. Three to five sentences, no more than 72 words, yet so critical.

Walking helps.

Okay, I'm heading to the streets of Georgetown to get lost in the crowds.

5 Comments:

Blogger Carrie Wilson Link said...

Might I suggest, "The end"?

10:38 AM

 
Blogger Jenny Rough said...

That's good. 2 down, 70 to go. Keep those suggestions comin'

:-)

10:40 AM

 
Blogger urban vegan said...

Writing is harder than it appears. And revising/editing uses an entirely different part of your brain.

I think the revising--and the clarity to critically analyze one's own work--is what distinguishes good writing from great writing. That's half the battle. So kudos to you!

11:55 AM

 
Blogger Michelle O'Neil said...

What are you working on? I'm dying ot know!

9:07 AM

 
Blogger Jenny Rough said...

Oh Michelle, you've workshopped it before :-)

9:48 AM

 

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